Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear...,

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Dear Jancy , How are you ? Hope you are doing

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and the family is

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fine I heard from Ayan that you are thinking to learn driving and would like to

advice

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you that

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a very important

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decision

decison

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decision

that you need to take , as it will help you boost your confidence and

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enhance your

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which will be

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for both personally and professionally For personal reasons , you will be able to go to any place without depending on your spouse or local taxi services and

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professionally you know having a driving licence is considered to be

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advantage to your resume which will enhance

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your career I would recommend you to

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a driving school preferably Ruby Driving School as the training fees are affordable and the tutor

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provides extra care for training us efficiently As

an advice

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would like to be more vigilant

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driving and give full attention to all traffic signs and other vehicles

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driving Hope my advice helps you

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successful

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learning of driving Thanks and Regards Anish

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coherence and cohesion

Try to ensure that your sentences are clearer and more concise. Some sentences could be split for better understanding.

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Make sure to use correct spelling and punctuation to enhance readability. For example, 'decison' should be 'decision'.

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You provided clear reasons for learning to drive and included a recommendation for a driving school, which makes your response relevant.

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Your tone is friendly and supportive, which is appropriate for a letter to a friend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

191 words

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