Some people belive that universities should focus on preparing students for specific careers, while others think they should provide general education. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is a common belief that a university must teach based on

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curriculum to

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their

students

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because

it can be a strong fundamental to

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their

future jobs.

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, there is

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opinion arguing that they should learn more

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common

knowledge which

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reqired

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required

by lots of companies. In

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paragraph, I will describe both

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views

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and write down my own opinion. Nowadays, many universities are teaching

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arrange

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of information related to their enrolled people's own major. That's because

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kind of education can be a heritage for them to get a job in the future.

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proffesional

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professional

knowledges are needed to become certain jobs,

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as medicine or law. In college, they can practice

essentional

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essential

skills and obtain theories which

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vital for their work. Because the only way to learn

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entering

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school, they have to give

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classes to their learner.

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, the society always

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to employ people who can do whatever they want. Many works

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full-fledged workers in several

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even though the

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government

. In Korea,

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, to be a public official, people are asked

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planty

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plenty

of licences like about Korean history, English, programming

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, and so on. Even those are not related to their main jobs, the

govrnment

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government

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. To

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that kinds

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of abilities,

university

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must give

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chance to their pupils to ready for strict job offers. In conclusion,

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the academies should teach specific

major

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relavant

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relevant

information, more than half of

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students

are

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still

needed

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far-reaching acknowledge. I am of the opinion that colleges must handle

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classes

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for their learners' future.

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language

Ensure proper grammar and spelling throughout the essay, particularly with words like 'their', 'common', and 'government'.

content

Provide more detailed examples to strengthen points, particularly in discussing the need for general education.

coherence

Clarify the structure of the paragraphs to make it easier for the reader to follow your arguments. Each paragraph should ideally focus on one main idea.

content

The essay presents both views clearly, demonstrating an understanding of the topic.

content

You have provided a relevant example regarding public officials in Korea, which adds credibility to your argument.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

272 words

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