Nowadays
children
spend all Use synonyms
time
on their Correct pronoun usage
their time
smart phone
.Absolutely it is a negative developmentCorrect your spelling
smartphones
,
because it is a harmful hobby for their physical and mental health.
It has several reasons for Remove the comma
apply
this
habit.At Linking Words
first,
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children
Use synonyms
lives
in small apartments Change the verb form
live
instead
of big houses with free space for playing physical games.Linking Words
For example
,they have to sit and play video games,play with their Linking Words
smart phones
,Correct your spelling
smartphones
over
watch TV,etc.The Change preposition
apply
second,
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it
is about changes Correct pronoun usage
apply
people's
lifestyles.In the past,every family had Change preposition
in people's
a
many Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
children
and they played games with their siblings,opposite of now.These days most family has Use synonyms
a
one or two Correct article usage
apply
child
not moreFix the agreement mistake
children
than
.Change preposition
apply
Hence
,Linking Words
children
don't have any choice except Use synonyms
using
Change the verb form
to use
gadget
and Fix the agreement mistake
gadgets
technology
for entertainment.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
this
situation has some positive Linking Words
point
.The first one is , learning how to use Fix the agreement mistake
points
technology
and Use synonyms
using
robots;Verb problem
apply
Children
have Use synonyms
a
Remove the article
apply
communication
with Replace the word
communicated
technology
since were born.Use synonyms
For example
,when they are 1 or 2 years old,they start Linking Words
to
watching TV and animations , or maybe they use some advanced toys.Change preposition
apply
Therefore
,they understand some tips and techniques for using gadgets.Linking Words
Second
one is , Change the article
The second
Use synonyms
children
who were born in Correct word choice
that children
generation
Z ,Alpha,and Beta are smarter than the past generation.Capitalize word
Generation
Then
they learn quickly and Linking Words
to
remember everything.Fix the infinitive
apply
Furthermore
, in the Linking Words
future
they can enhance Add a comma
future,
technology
.
In summary,disadvantages are more than advantages.Use synonyms
Due to
,Linking Words
phisycal
and mental health,become lazy,don't challenge their minds,and don't Correct your spelling
physical
brainstorming
.These Wrong verb form
brainstorm
are have
negative effects on Change the verb form
have
children
's Use synonyms
life
.Fix the agreement mistake
lives
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