Some people believe that the government should fund arts, while others think it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays nations think that arts should be funded by the administration, but other people have the opposite point of view. In my mind, both of them have the right to their opinion. The issue arises from a multitude of contributing factors, all of which play a critical role in its complexity.

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problem. At first glance, art should develop independently from the financial situation in the country. It is a first cause,

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the government should help with money. I believe, that investments from the administration should be bigger than from people who buy facilities.

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, the governments of countries have more significant problems than art and

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they should solve them.

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, education, medicine, transportation and other important issues. Because if a country has financial problems the government should separate vital issues from common ones. I think

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that sponsors and donates would resolve

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problem. Every country has a huge amount of affluent people who can change

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situation. I acknowledge that rich individuals want to have something that

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from their support. But the administration should develop some agreements.

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, I would like to summarize that the problem with funding for art should be solved because the

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particularly important to national development.