the maps show the change of lake side from 2000 and 2009

the maps show the change of lake side from 2000 and 2009
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the maps show the change of lake side from 2000 and 2009
The 2 maps illustrate the development of
Lake
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side
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Side
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for the
last
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9 years. There have been several changes,
such
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as an expansion of the industrial complex
,
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and, construction
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construction
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the construction
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of
new
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a new
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shopping
centre
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, university, offices and multi-screen cinema. In 2000, on the north
side
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of the
lake
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were located residential areas with art
centre
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, school, old town and derelict warehouses near it. On the south
side
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of the
lake
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industrial complex and residential area were situated. Turning to the present-day map, the
lake
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reduced in size and has been replaced by a pond. The extent of woodland has
also
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diminished. As for the residential areas, in 2009 most of them were replaced by a shopping
centre
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and industrial complex which has been expanded in size. On the other
side
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of the pond, the art
centre
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turned into a multi-screen cinema.
Additionally
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, a university was constructed.
School
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Schools
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and residential
area
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areas
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remained in the same place, even so
instead
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of the old town and derelict warehouses there are offices with car
park
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parks
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near it.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words lake, side, centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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