Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates plans for two possible sites for a shopping mall in the
city
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of Brandfield. It can be seen that the two sites under consideration are in the north and the
south east
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southeast
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of the town. The first possible site for the shopping mall, S1, is just north of the
city
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centre, above the railway line, which runs from the
south east
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southeast
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of the
city
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to the
north west
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northwest
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. If it is built here, it will be next to a large housing estate,
thus
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providing easy access for those living on the estate and in the
city
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centre. It will
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be next to the river that runs through the town. The site in the
south east
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southeast
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, S2, is again just by the railway line and fairly close to the
city
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centre, but it is near
to
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apply
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an industrial estate rather than housing. There is a main road that runs through the
city
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and is close to both sites,
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providing good road access to either location. A large golf course and park in the west of the town
prevents
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prevent
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this
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area from being available as a site.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proximity
  • residential area
  • industrial zone
  • city center
  • main road
  • benefits
  • convenience
  • traffic congestion
  • accessibility
  • workers
  • compare
  • differences
  • pros and cons
  • suitable
  • analysis
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