The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.

The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.
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The bar chart provides information about the
proportion
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of the population in the United Kingdom who ate the standard
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day amount of fruit and vegetables in the years between 2002 and 2010.
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, it is clearly seen that consumption of fruits and vegetables in three categories
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as men, women, and
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had similar
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and decrease patterns over the period. From the outset, starting at 22% in 2002, the
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of men witnessed a noticeable increase at the start of 2006, reaching 28%. The percentage of women experienced the greatest growth from 25% to 32% in the years between 2002 and 2006. In 2010, both genders saw a slight decrease,
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, the
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of women stood at the highest position at 27% compared to figures for men at 24%.
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, the figure for
children
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who consumed vegetables and fruits started at 11% in 2002. In 2006, the percentage of
children
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experienced a significant increase, reaching 16%.
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, in 2010, the
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of
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witnessed a negligible decrease, consuming 14%
at the end
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of the period.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, children with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
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