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Topic: The graph below shows the number of students from the US, the UK and Australia who studied in universities in other countries from 2002 to 2007.

Topic: The graph below shows the number of students from the US, the UK and Australia who studied in universities in other countries from 2002 to 2007.
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The line chart compares the number of
students
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 from three countries who studied in universities outside their nation from 2002 to 2007.
Overall
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, throughout the period, American
students
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 who studied abroad were the highest
while
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 Australian
students
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 were recorded as the lowest. Starting with American pupils, at the beginning and the
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 of the timeframe, those who travelled to
further
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 their studies in a university outside the country, were 50,000.
Nevertheless
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, around 2003,
this
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 number experienced a slow decline,
such
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 that in 2004 there was a dip to approximately 45,000. In regards to British
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, they started out
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 30,000
students
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 who enrolled in universities outside the UK. By 2003, a gradual downward pattern started;
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, in 2007, it had fallen to just over 20,000
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.
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 the
students
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 from Australia, for the most part of the period, around 10,000
students
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 left their country to study
in
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 a university abroad. Except for the year 2004, where there was a temporary slight decline to about 9,000
students
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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