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The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map compares three sites of new
shops
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 (A,
B
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, and C) in the Ellington area.
Overall
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, as can be seen,
B
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 be located in the countryside on the north-west side without facilities.
While
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 A had significant pleas with various servers.
However
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, the Special area is near the railway.
It is clear that
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 A receives a significant peak located in the east north resoresidential location. Next to A
shops
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, there was a traffic-free zone
while
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 from the north supermarket was the railway and Industrial Pleac.
In addition
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,
B
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 side will be in the north-west and be located in the countryside.
Moreover
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, from
east
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the east
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 side will be a motorway.
On the other hand
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, C
shops
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 are located in the South of the countryside
while
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 from the west stat sied there are railway and Industrial.
Finally
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, in the east way, there will be residential and an airport. A and C took dominant sites on the map more than
B
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shops
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 .

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words shops, b with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proposed sites
  • supermarket
  • locations
  • central
  • outskirts
  • residential areas
  • transport hubs
  • proximity
  • major roads
  • landmarks
  • accessibility
  • competition
  • shopping district
  • industrial area
  • green spaces
  • logistic ease
  • isolated
  • densely populated
  • traffic
  • customer reach
  • expansion possibilities
  • accessibility
  • customer base
  • logistical convenience
  • recommend
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