You recently booked a part time course at a college. You now need to cencle your booking.write a letter to the college administration.in your letter Say which part time course you booked Explain why you need to cencle your booking Ask about booking a different course

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,as I take a moment to pen down my thoughts.it

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the administration department. First of all,I would like to tell you about the

course

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I booked a month ago it's an auto cad

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basically a

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program.My cousin suggested to me that

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have free time you should book

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in advance and not waste your time during your vacation.

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I could not begin the

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so I had to

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book it.

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imperative that we carefully consider another short

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program and the scope of

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is so vast if you have

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available,please let me know. I look forward to your

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response and sincerely thank you for your time and consideration.

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faithfully, Rabia

rizbia123Thu Feb 06 2025

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coherence cohesion

Try to improve the logical flow and structure of your paragraphs. Make sure each paragraph addresses one main idea clearly.

task achievement

Make sure to clearly state your cancellation request and the new course you're interested in at the beginning of your letter.

suitable writing tone

Your letter demonstrates a good understanding of the formal tone required for such correspondence.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

171 words

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