The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%).

The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%).
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%).
The bar graph provides information about the problems associated with UK residents in seven
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, reported in 2008. Problems associated with health services challenged more than half of the population. Belfast and Cardiff accounted for 59 and 58
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of the natives reporting poor health services. Birmingham followed slightly lower than these two
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with 55
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. The percentage of
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people complaining about
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problem was the same for Newcastle and London,
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Manchester accounted for 51
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. The only city that reported less for
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issue was Glasgow, contributing a total of 49
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. The other major issues reported were problems with education and training and air pollution. Education and training was a foremost problem with Glasgow and London, with a percentage of 53. Belfast and Birmingham reported 52
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, Cardiff 51
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. Other
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, including Newcastle and Manchester, contributed to 46 and 45
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, respectively.
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, air pollution was the least reported problem in all the major
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threshold of less than 20
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as a major issue.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • affordable housing
  • urban areas
  • overcrowding
  • homelessness
  • traffic congestion
  • car ownership
  • public transportation systems
  • commuting times
  • air pollution
  • industrial activities
  • air quality
  • green spaces
  • urbanization
  • mental health
  • crime rates
  • socio-economic factors
  • sense of security
  • waste management
  • waste disposal
  • recycling
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