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The charts below show the comparison of time spent, in minutes per day, by UK males and females on household and leisure activities in 2008.

The charts below show the comparison of time spent, in minutes per day, by UK males and females on household and leisure activities in 2008.
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The charts illustrate the daily average time allocated by UK
men
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 and
women
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 on household tasks l and leisure
activities
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 in 2008. looking at the chart's details, in terms of Leisure tasks,
men
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 generally spent more time than
women
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 on Leisure
activities
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. watching TV and video and listening to the radio which are the most time-consuming
Activities
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 by
men
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, who spend about 137
minutes
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 daily. the reading book showed minimal differences between genders. engaging in sports and exercise was the least popular activity among all other
activities
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, with spending about 15
minutes
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 by
men
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 and
women
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 11
minutes
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 per
day
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. In terms of household
activities
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,
women
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 spent significantly more hours per
day
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 on Housework
Activities
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 compared to
men
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. basically,
women
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 spend more household tasks on Cooking and washing approximately 75
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 per
day
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 compared to about approximately 30
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 per
day
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 for
men
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.
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, shopping and clothes washing and ironing accounted for roughly 35
minutes
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 per
day
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on
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women
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.
whereas
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men
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 spent about 25 and 10
minutes
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 per
day
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 for each activity. Repair work is the least activity among all other
activities
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, with
men
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 spending approximately 20
minutes
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 per
day
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 and
men
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 nearly 10
minutes
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 daily.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, activities, minutes, day with synonyms.
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