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the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.

the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
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The
two
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 maps depict the accessibility ways to the
city
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 hospital in different years-2007 and 2010.
Overall
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, it can be seen that some new facilities added to the latter map.
In addition
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, the
two
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 parks and roundabouts were structured in the following design. In 2007, there was a ring
road
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 all around the clinic. In front of the hospital, there were six bus stations on
two
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 sides of the arrival
road
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along with
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 the public and staff parking lot on the right side of it.
Moreover
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, there was an intersection on the
city
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road
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.
In contrast
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, in 2010, the ring
road
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 remained unchanged all around the
city
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 hospital.
Additionally
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, the position of the public car changed to the right of the hospital.
However
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, the staff car park remained stable on the right of the
city
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road
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.
Two
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 new roundabouts were established there,
as well as
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 a bus station was made on the left side of the
city
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road
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, city, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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