The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map provides information about the layouts of
construction
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the construction
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of
central
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the central
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library for
a
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apply
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public use, using maps from 2 decades and today.
Overall
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, the building underwent tremendous changes over the given period, with being either repurposed or upgraded. Only the entrance place remains unchanged for the time recorded. One of the main
modification
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occurred for a reading room, which
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initially
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intended for the readers of newspapers and magazines and was reconstructed into an electrical
devices'
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area. The location of CDs, videos and computer games was renovated and equipped with facilities for storytelling events, sofas and the collection of
children
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children's
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books. The previous kids' literature,
on the other hand
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, was placed in the north-western part of the library and now it is a zone for lecturers. The enquiry desk, where customers could acquire tickets and return manuscripts, was replaced in the hall and redeveloped into
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in the closed territory. Adult non-fiction materials and tables in the middle of
hall
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the hall
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were removed, and
currently
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self-service machines, all reference and adult fiction manuscripts are located in the eastern and western parts of the lobby.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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