The figure shows the results of a survey of 1000 adolescents in five different countries.the participants were asked at what age they believed certain rights and responsibilities should be granted to young people. summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features.

The figure shows the results of a survey of 1000 adolescents in five different countries.the participants were asked at what age they believed certain rights and responsibilities should be granted to young people. summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features.
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report derives from the above bar chart which enumerates the outcomes of a survey which was aiming at teenagers' views of what
age
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they thought certain
rights
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and responsibilities should be offered to youths. As an initial overview, most of the voters saw that
marriage
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should be before the
age
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of 20 except those who voted in Japan. They believed that it needed to be during the 20s. Not only is
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point clear, but
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all teens who surveyed choose to allow criminal responsibility at an early
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. Notably, in the USA, starting a life with a partner and voting
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had the same results. To illustrate, adolescents' opinion was that the ideal
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to offer those
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is 18 years,
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; they thought that criminal responsibility should be allowed at the
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of 12.
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, British teens tend to let the
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right at 18, and the other
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before that. Next with Mexico's results, it seems that the outcomes are pretty close to each other, as they were hovering around 16 years.
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it is clear that
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Japanese teenagers tend to choose ages which are above 16.
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, for
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, they choose 22, and for the voting right they choose 20.
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, Egypt's results about the right of
marriage
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were the same as Mexico's.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age, rights, marriage with synonyms.
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