People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still don't take responsibility to protect the environment. Why is this? What should be done to encourage people to protect the environment?

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Nowadays
individuals
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believe that the
enviroment
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environment
is essential.
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, a large number of
pepole
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people
still don't take responsibility for protecting the environment. In
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want to discuss causes and solutions for
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problem. There are several reasons
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why
people
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don't do their responsibilities
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the environment.
Firstly
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, these days
people
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struggle with different things
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for
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instance,
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and education.
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, they
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have adequate time to face
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enviromental
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environmental
issues. To address
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problem,
individuals
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or the government should
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increase
awareness about some easiest ways of
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of
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this
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kind of
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recycle
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their waste. The second reason is
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to the government. When governments do not do their duty,
individuals
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do neither. To tackle
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problem governments should do something to protect
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nature like monitor the
peocess
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process
in industries more closely because
on
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one
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of the most harmful air pollutants is carbon dioxide. When
people
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see
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of the
govvernment
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government
they encourage to contribute.
Individuals
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can do lots of
works
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to help the preserving of nature .
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, using public
transportations
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transportation
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instead
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of their own cars
due to
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the gases emitted from petrol
are
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so dangerous for health. Another way that can be useful is
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not
use
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of
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single-use plastics because they can destroy
environment
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the environment
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.
To sum up
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, we should have
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in awareness and enforce some laws to force
people
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to
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their
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duty.

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content
You express a clear understanding of the importance of environmental protection.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental responsibility
  • sustainable choices
  • green practices
  • eco-friendly
  • carbon footprint
  • renewable energy
  • recycling programs
  • environmental awareness
  • conservation efforts
  • climate change mitigation
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