The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart provides information about the number of people living in New Zealand in 2011 and 2012. classified by

ages

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age

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groups

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All ages, Under 15, 15-39, 40-64 and 65+.

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show a percentage of change between the provided years. the total of residents of New Zealand in 2011 was 4.381.269, it increased 0.6% by the next year reaching 4.410.284. Surprisingly it is mostly composed

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juveniles and Grown-ups the grouped ages that

decline

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by 0.2% were Under 15 and 15-39,

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however

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the youths category is the second with the lowest

participants

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with 896.364 in 2012.

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the youth-adults category is the one with

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members reaching 1.574.102 in 2012. the

others

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two

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the Adult and Elders jumped from 1.331.907 and 573.946 to 1.339.898 and 596.903 which means they rose 0.6% and 4%

resplectively

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respectively

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, It is explicitly observed that the only area that showed a considerable variation was the group 65+. Despite

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, its quantity is too insignificant to have a big

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in

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the general population.