The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the average expenditure of an American family on three specific categories of goods/services in 2010, presented in dollars.
Overall
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most
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money the family spent in
March
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,
while
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the least of it was
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in April.
It is clear that
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clothing was the most popular good in April and February,
whereas
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food
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required more expenses in January and
March
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. Focusing first on April and February, in 2010, almost $700 went on clothing,
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for gas and
food
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, the corresponding figures were less than $600 and slightly over $500, respectively, with the lowest level of monthly expenditure in total for
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month. When it comes to February, the family most frequently bought clothing, with almost $600 spent on their outfits, which was almost equal to the sums utilised on
food
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.
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, the amount of money spent on gas was three times lower. Notably, the level of monthly spending
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was lower than $400. As for the remaining months, in January and
March
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, the members of the family mostly
ecquired
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acquired
required
food
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spending during each of these months roughly $500 of their general income
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category, as opposed to the clothes they were buying, with nearly $200 and $300, respectively. Regarding the average monthly expenses for
March
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, they were the most significant
this
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month, at over $400 in total, which was approximately $50 higher compared to January's sums.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words march, food with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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