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Band 4.5

In many countries, the amount of household waste like food packaging is increasing. What are the causes of this problem? What measures could be taken to recuse it ?

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There is no denying the fact that the amount of
waste
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 products significantly increased during the past few years in many countries .
This
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 essay will discuss the main causes and the
measure
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measures
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 that should be taken .
To begin
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increse
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increase
 the
waste
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 among the
househeld
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household
.
Firstly
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 ,the
increase
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 in the consumption rate of each
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due to
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 fast-based life
which
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apply
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make
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people
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 rely on fast food and fast fashion
thus
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lead
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leading
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 to
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increase
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an increase
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 in the
amout
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amount
 of plastic backages and containers .
In other words
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,
the
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 global population growth and
life style
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lifestyle
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 change
considered
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are considered
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 as the main
couses
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causes
courses
beside
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besides
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 the
lack
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 of
recyling
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recycling
 and
waste
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managment
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management
 from both the governments and the
people
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.
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 ,
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lack
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a lack
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 of
people
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awarenes
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awareness
 about
recyling
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recycling
 habits and
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lack
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the lack
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 of facilities
by
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for
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the
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responsible companies have a huge effect on
controling
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controlling
waste
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 . In
term
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terms
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 of the measures that should be taken by both
individuals'
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individuals
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 and the
govenments
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government
.
Increase
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people
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people's
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awarenes
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awareness
 about reusing and
recyling
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recycling
for example
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instade
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instead
 of trowing glass
jar
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jars
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 reuse
it
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them
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 for storage .It is
also
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children
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children's
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knowleadge
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knowledge
on
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of
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waste
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mangements
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management
managements
 will be
benefical
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beneficial
on
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in
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 the long
skale
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scale
.
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, the
govenments
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government
 efforts to provide special
waste
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 containers and
provied
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provided
provide
benefical
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beneficial
way
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ways
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 to use
waste
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product
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products
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 in other fields .
For instance
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 ,Sweden's
govenment
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government
known
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is known
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 for
their
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its
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waste
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-to-energy programs
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whereas
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where
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 almost all
househeld
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household
wast
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waste
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 either
recycle
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recycled
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 or converted into energy,
this
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 not only
reduce
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reduces
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 the amount of
wast
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waste
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 sent to landfill but
also
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 contribute
ro
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to
 the country's energy production. There are many causes for
househeld
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household
waste
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increase
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such
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,
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apply
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modern
life style
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lifestyle
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 and
lack
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 of the
recyle
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recycle
peoducts
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products
.
However
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, the
govenment
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government
 and the individuals should take equal responsibilities to overcome
this
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 issue .

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task achievement
Ensure that your introduction clearly outlines the main points that will be discussed in the essay. This helps set the reader's expectations.
coherence and cohesion
Check your essay for grammatical accuracy and spelling errors to enhance clarity. For example, 'increse' should be 'increase' and 'awarenes' should be 'awareness'.
task achievement
Develop your supporting points more clearly. For instance, explain how the lack of recycling awareness impacts waste management in detail.
task achievement
You have identified relevant causes of increasing household waste and suggested some measures that can be implemented. Your examples, like Sweden's waste-to-energy program, are excellent and illustrate your points well.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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