The pie chart gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.

The pie chart gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.
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The pie charts compare the proportion of three main macronutrients in separate
diets
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, namely an average
diet
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, a healthy
diet
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and a healthy
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for sport. In general, carbohydrates are the highest nutritional ingredient
overall
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,
whereas
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the rate of fat is the lowest among given
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. It is noticeable that a healthy
diet
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for sports consumes the highest amount of carbs but the lowest amount of fat compared to the two remaining
diets
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.
Sport
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players select a healthy
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with 60% of carbohydrates. The percentages of carbohydrates in a healthy
diet
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and an average
diet
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are relatively lower, at 50% and 40% respectively.
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, fat consumption remains lowest in all healthy
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for people playing sports (15%),
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the figures for an average
diet
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and a healthy
diet
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are equal (20%). In terms of protein, average
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eaters require the highest level, at 40%.
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is 10% higher than the proportion of protein in a healthy
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, and 15% more than the proportion in a healthy
diet
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for sport.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words diets, diet with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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