The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.

The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
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The pie charts illustrate the changing pattern in
the
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water
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consumption for three purposes
are
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residential, industry,
agriculture
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and agriculture
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in San Diego, California and the rest of the world. Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that the most of
water
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was used for residential in San Diego and California.
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agriculture
account
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for the most of
water
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in the rest of the world. In San Diego, residential use accounts for the majority of
water
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consumption at 60%. Meanwhile, agriculture only makes up
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smallest proportion at 17%. An opposite pattern is seen in the rest of the world, where residential and farm account for 69 and 8% respectively. The figure for industrial use of
water
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is the same for both these regions at 23%. In California, the
water
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using
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for farming and industry is roughly the same proportion at 39 and 33% respectively. The figure for residential use is only slightly lower at 28% of total
water
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consumption.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • households
  • significant
  • industrial use
  • implications
  • agriculture
  • geographical
  • climatic
  • economic factors
  • patterns
  • sustainability
  • practices
  • surprising
  • exceptionally
  • improvements
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