Today, many nations have invested money in genetic
enginnering
. In my opinion, I think Correct your spelling
engineering
this
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as it can Linking Words
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cure
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apply
diseases
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,
and to produce crops more quickly.
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Firstly
, genetic engineering is essential to the future and gained more benefits. Linking Words
In other words
, it can be used to produce crops that grow faster and bigger which is Linking Words
has
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also
resistant to insects and Linking Words
diseases
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For example
, in Saudi Arabia, Linking Words
dates
grow just in hot weather which is not available for the whole year, but using genetic engineering can produce Use synonyms
dates
in any season. Use synonyms
As a result
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people
do not have to wait for the next summer to get Use synonyms
dates
, and Use synonyms
also
many cold countries Linking Words
using
genetic engineering to produce Wrong verb form
use
dates
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of Linking Words
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importing
another countries
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other countries
that
costs a lot.
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which
Secondly
, genetic engineering helps Linking Words
people
to save their lifeUse synonyms
,
and keep the body Remove the comma
apply
health
. Replace the word
healthy
That is
to say, scientists may Linking Words
use
genetic engineering to Use synonyms
cure
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diseases
. When Use synonyms
people
suffer from Use synonyms
a
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danagerous
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dangerous
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sicentists
can produce medicines that Correct your spelling
scientists
helps
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help
people
to Use synonyms
cure
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from
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apply
diseases
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For instance
, cancer has become common Linking Words
thses
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these
day
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days
which
the body cannot bear the pain, so many Correct word choice
when
people
dead because of cancer. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, genetic engineering can Linking Words
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use
to save Wrong verb form
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people
's Use synonyms
life
and produce Fix the agreement mistake
lives
treatment
to Fix the agreement mistake
treatments
cure
them.
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To sum up
, I believe that genetic engineering has more positive development that can Linking Words
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use
to produce crops to grow faster and bigger, and it can Wrong verb form
be used
lead
to help society from illnesses Verb problem
apply
to produce
medicines to Change preposition
by producing
cure
them.Use synonyms