Some people think foreign visitors should be charged more than local people when they visit the cultural and historical attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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among some people that

tourist

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tourists

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have to pay

extra

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an extra

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fee than local people when visiting

cultruals

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cultural

and

historicals

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historical

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attractions in a

country

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, though I strongly disagree

due to

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bad impressions and not a good way to

attrcat

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attract

tourism. Applying

extra

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an extra

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fee when travelers visit a

country

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is not a good signing for welcoming, and might reduce

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tourist

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to visit

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the

country

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becauce

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because

when you have large numbers of

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foreign

visitors it will increase the income for a

country

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since they will have to pay for transportation and food, places to stay. So it's better to make them feel welcome to

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attract

more visitors and

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encourage

them to stay longer and

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visting

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visiting

the

country

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again. Charging

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tourists

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for a

county

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country

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with more

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of same

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same

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apply

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locals is a good sign of

welcoming

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and will

atract

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attract

more to visit which will increase

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apply

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income and make a great value for tourism.

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language

Revise sentence structures for clarity and correct spelling errors (e.g., 'tourist' should be 'tourists', 'cultruals' should be 'cultural', and 'attrcat' should be 'attract').

content

Provide specific examples to support your main points, such as statistics on tourism income or cases where countries have seen positive results from welcoming tourists.

argument

You present a clear stance against charging foreign visitors more, which is a good foundation for your argument.

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

152 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

maintenance
preservation
cultural heritage
differential pricing
overcrowding
discriminatory
tourism revenue
economic impact
sustainability
responsible tourism
global heritage
cultural exchange
funding models
tourist influx
local taxpayers

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