The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000.

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pie chart illustrates information about modifications in the global population in different areas from 1900 to 2000.

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, what stands out from the graph is that the total number of people

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our planet saw a significant increase to 6 billion individuals in just one hundred years.

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the proportion of people in Asia and Europe, which made up more than three-quarters of the global population experienced a steady decrease,

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as Africa, Latin America, and others increased. Regarding Asia, the number of residents experienced a rapid fall from 60% to 54%, between 1900 and 2000. The most decreasing percentage presented region of Europe, going down to 14%.

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, the population in North America remained stable from 1900 and 2000. Turning to the region of Africa, witnessed a significant increase, made up

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more than two times in 2000, reaching 10%.

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, there was a dramatic increase in Latin America, rising from 3% to 8%, between 1900 and 2000.

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, a new Middle East and North African region appeared, which made up 6% in the year 2000.

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The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statements ? with the help of technology , students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly.

some people think governments should spend money on measures to save language with few speakers from dying out completely. others think this is a waste of financial resources. discuss both views and give your opinion.