You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently stayed at a hotel and you had a great time. Write a letter to the hotel. In your letter thank the manager and his staff give some particular examples of why you enjoyed your stay at the hotel so much explain that you have written a review of the hotel on a popular website for tourists You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to express my satisfaction regarding my stay at your hotel
last
week. I am very thankful for the services provided by you and your staff. I really liked the
delux
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deluxe
Delux
room as it has amenities
such
as
TV
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a TV
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, Fridge, Double bed, Recliner sofa, and a balcony view towards the sea. I was impressed with the quick
check in
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check-in
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and
check out
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check-out
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process because of that I saved a lot of time.
In addition
, I really appreciate the quick services
by
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of
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the hotel staff and the food was amazing.
Furthermore
, thanks for serving the fresh food upon our arrival. Recently, I got to know about
one
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a
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travel website named travelbuddy.com in which I wrote a review mentioning my stay at your hotel.
Moreover
,
this
site is really helpful to all the travellers so, they can get
suggestion
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based on reviews. Once again thank you for your services. Faithfully, Vishal Jangrala
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task achievement
Include more specific descriptions or examples to further enrich your letter and offer a more vivid picture of your experience.
coherence cohesion
Make use of linking words to connect different points and paragraphs for smoother reading.
task achievement
The letter includes clear gratitude towards the hotel's management and staff, fulfilling a primary requirement of the task.
coherence cohesion
The letter is well-organized with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.

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