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The chart below show the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below show the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided bar graphs describe the number of households in
US
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the US
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 based on annual income for the years 2007,2011 and 2015. In the year 2007, almost 30 million families earned more than $100,000, followed by more than 25million
familes
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families
 earned
in
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apply
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between $25,000 and $49,999. 25 million households
earns
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earn
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 less than $25,000. 15 million families produce an income of $75,000-$99,999. In the year 2011, almost 30million families earned

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution
  • household income
  • economic fluctuations
  • income brackets
  • economic downturns
  • economic growth
  • global financial crisis
  • recovery
  • middle-income bracket
  • trends
  • proportion
  • stability
  • stagnation
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