Some people suggest that regular driving tests should be taken by people, to reduce the number of accidents, throughout their lives rather than one single test. What do you think are the advantages of repeat driving tests? Do these outweigh the disadvantages?

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Having to retake driving

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more benefits to people to enhance their abilities to new upcoming technology changes. I believe

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rule can bring more benefits rather than drawbacks. Road accidents are happening In daily life and the situation is getting dangerous nowadays.

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, the capability of the car drivers can be

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one of the reasons

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condition. People tend to

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the rules

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they are driving on the roads. They just focus on their business without considering if there are other people who

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using the roads.

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, to prevent the situation

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car drivers should retake driving

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every five years to renew their

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to observe if their abilities to drive

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competent

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as before.

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policy can be implemented in

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reality, the government can introduce new policies if they change with the updated rules.

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Task Achievement

Consider elaborating on the advantages and disadvantages of repeat driving tests to provide a more balanced view.

Coherence and Cohesion

Try to improve the logical flow between sentences and paragraphs for better coherence. Transition phrases can help.

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Ensure your arguments are well-supported with specific examples to strengthen your points.

Task Achievement

You have identified a relevant topic and provided an opinion on it.

Task Achievement

Your concern for road safety and driver competency is commendable and relevant to the subject.

Fully explain your ideas

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Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

151 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

road safety
driving skills
traffic laws
accident prevention
driver assessment
response to changes
responsibility
bad habits
requalification
disqualification
adaptability
test frequency
safety standards
driving performance
defensive driving

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