Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees this is beneficial. To what extent is globalisation a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

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The given topic tells true that we live in a globalised world. I remember during the 199 it was impossible to know what was happening worldwide. We used to get information from TV only. We couldn't know about other country's people.

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, what are the people like, and how do they live? Nowadays what we may want we can search and see in our person. Globalization has positive and negative aspects. .A positive increase gives us a chance to travel around the world, to work in different countries, to make money, to study

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abroad

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to learn about different

culture

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cultures

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Task Response

Expand on your introduction by clearly stating your opinion on globalisation being positive or negative. Include a strong thesis statement that outlines the main points you will discuss.

Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure each paragraph has a clear central idea and includes supporting details or examples. This will help maintain coherence throughout your essay.

Task Response

Conclude your essay by summarising your main points and restating your opinion. This helps to clarify your position on the topic.

Content Knowledge

You've correctly identified both positive and negative aspects of globalisation, indicating that you understand the complexity of the topic.

Engagement

Your use of personal experience adds a relatable touch to your argument, which can engage the reader.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

104 words

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Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees this is beneficial. To what extent is globalisation a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people believe that it is a good idea that older people continue to work if it is possible for them to do. Do you agree or disagree?

While choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?

A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

## 문제 Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion. (2)