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Write a letter to the government about the lack of sports facilities in your hometown for people of your age

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Dear Sir I am Ardasher Xushvaxtov and
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I am
 doing my eleventh grade
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 St Xaviers School in Hosanagara Panchayat.
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I am writing
 to you to
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bring
 to your notice that there is no sports complex in my town. My
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 works for the Central
Goverentment
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Government
, and he is deputed as a sub-collector of my hometown. I am a tennis player and
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was
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 that there was no dedicated area to
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 tennis. I
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 you to
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 a sports complex in pir hometown. It will benefit the residents in various ways. Students of my age can spend their leisure time effectively.
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 things improve, we can
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 coaches for multiple sports activities, and people from my town might get chances to
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play
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 for national tournaments. Most of the barren fields here which
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being
 converted to industriya can be acquired
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government
 and can be used for
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building
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 Complex. Awaiting your immediate action. Yours Sincerely, Ardasher.

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language
Ensure correct spelling and grammar to enhance clarity.
structure
Clearly introduce the main ideas in your opening paragraph for better coherence.
structure
Make sure to keep each paragraph focused on a single main idea and avoid mixing topics.
content
The letter clearly states the issue of lack of sports facilities and its implications.
content
A personal connection to tennis adds a relatable touch to your request.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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