The graph below shows U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel (1980-2030). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Umar

The line graph represents information about U.S energy expenditure by fuel from 1980 to 2030 .

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,the line illustrated the energy expenditure of Nuclear ,Solar/Wind and Hydropower all of these things together initiated with

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indicator . The consumption of Petro and Oil by fuel in 1980 was 35

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units and decade by decade fluctuated ,eventually started to progressively increase and will reach a peak

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oil in 2030.The usage of Coal and Natural Gas fluctuated marginally between each other

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a rose showing approximately 27

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things for Coal and less than 25

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for Natural Gas. Nuclear ,Solar/Wind and Hydropower all

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had similar energy production , 3quadrillion items ,their consumption started to oscillate little and in the end all of them by projections will have a different expenditure by oil ,Nuclear quantity will have more than 5

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things for,Solar/Wings exactly 5

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only Hydropower is predicted to decrease less than 5quadrillion dollars .