Task: You recently stayed at a hotel and had a bad experience. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter: Explain the problems you faced during your stay. Say what you did to try to resolve the issue. State what you would like the manager to do.

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Respected sir

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Dear Sir

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, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

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letter to show my dissatisfaction

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with

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your hotel stay on 25th December 2024. I

was

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have been

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a regular and loyal customer of your hotel since 2021 but

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is the first time

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Verb problem

have

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facing

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faced

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issues. I would like to get your attention on

room

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cleanliness because the

room

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was not cleaned properly and you can find cigarette all over the place.

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room

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service was poor and the employee

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was

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aggressive when I talked about

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problem. I even tried to clean the

room

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since the smell was intolerable. But my efforts went in vain.

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room

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the room

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spray is

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empty when tried to spray. I request you to attend

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this

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problem immediately and resolve it.

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, the

emoloyee

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employee

should be given

warning

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a warning

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about his behaviour

otherwise

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it might affect your business. I am looking forward

your

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prompt response. Yours faithfully, Santhoshkumar

ksanthosh701Fri Feb 14 2025

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task achievement

Consider providing more details about your experience, such as specific examples or descriptions of the cleanliness issues.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure that all main points are clearly separated into distinct paragraphs to improve readability.

coherence and cohesion

Include a more formal closing statement to enhance the tone of the letter.

task achievement

The letter maintains a respectful tone throughout, which is appropriate for addressing a hotel manager.

task achievement

You clearly articulated the issues faced during your stay, which provides a foundation for the manager to understand your concerns.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

156 words

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Task: You recently stayed at a hotel and had a bad experience. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter: Explain the problems you faced during your stay. Say what you did to try to resolve the issue. State what you would like the manager to do.

Nowadays most green energy is becoming ever more prevalent in both developed and developing countries. Some argue they greatly reduce costs and are better for the environment, others believe they are a serious threat to energy security. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your experience.

In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

Some people say that high taxes are necessary so that the government will have enough money to provide good public services for the population. However, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think everyone should be a vegetarian because we do not need to eat meat to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?