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The graphs compare the number of deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990 with the amount of research funding allocated to each of those diseases. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below.

The graphs compare the number of deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990 with the amount of research funding allocated to each of those diseases. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below.
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The bar charts illustrate the total number of deaths which were
resulted
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caused
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 by six specific
diseases
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 in Someland throughout 1990,
as well as
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 the amount of money allocated for the research of these illnesses.
It is clear that
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 by far the most frequent disease among the population was
TB
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,
whereas
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 leprosy,
AIDS
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, and tropical
diseases
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 affected people most rarely.
Overall
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, the most significant proportion of the budget went
on
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to
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AIDS
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 research,
whereas
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TB
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 was funded at the lowest levels. Focusing first on the principal reasons
of
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for
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 the deaths, almost 2,000,000 of them were
resulted
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caused
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 by
TB
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,
whereas
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 for diarrhoea and malaria, the corresponding figures were nearly 500,000. Regarding tropical
diseases
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, leprosy, and
AIDS
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, they lead to roughly 250,000 fatal cases. As for the research funding, by far the most explored illness was
AIDS
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, with nearly 200,000,000 utilised for
this
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, as opposed to leprosy and tropical
diseases
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, where the level of funding was more than 50% lower. With regard to
diarrhea
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diarrhoea
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 and malaria, nearly 50,000,000 went to these sectors. Notably,
TB
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 was the least researched disease, with less than 250,000,000 spent on it.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words diseases, tb, aids with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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