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Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map depicts the layout of the town of
Brandfield
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Bradfield
, with proposed two areas S1 and S2 by planners to construct a shopping mall.
Overall
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, the north part of the city contains the housing and industrial estates for the citizens' benefit,
while
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 unwinding areas
such
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 as
park
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the park
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 and Golf Club, and
city
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the city
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 centre are located
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on
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 the south side of the Brandfield, making the area more appropriate
with
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for
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 the convenience for people. Two sectors are separated by railway lines in the middle of the territory. The area of S1 is situated by residential buildings in the north corner and industrial constructions in the eastern part. The main roadsides cross the northeastern side, north of which are laid through the houses.
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, the river flows over the land, making it perfectly suitable to be considered as the zone of industry. S2,
on the other hand
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, is generally orientated
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 the convenience of common residents. The notable zone of
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 is aimed to provide relaxing green parking spaces and golf courses in the western suburbs. The downtown is at the heart of
district
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the district
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, surrounded by highways from southeastern to northeastern sides. The river runs along the region and trains go beside it, containing all necessary facilities nearby.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proximity
  • residential area
  • industrial zone
  • city center
  • main road
  • benefits
  • convenience
  • traffic congestion
  • accessibility
  • workers
  • compare
  • differences
  • pros and cons
  • suitable
  • analysis
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