The chart gives information about commuters and telecommuters working for AppCom. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The presented bar chart compares the proportion of employees who work at APPCom including: commutes every day, some telecommuting and regular telecommuting in a specific period of time (2013-2016-2019). The vertical axis measured percentages of commuters and telecommuters,

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the horizontal showed the changes over time.

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, the commute everyday ratio had the most significant decrease,

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regular telecommuting had a dramatic increase.

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, some telecommuting remained steady.

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the given diagram, it can be seen that in 2013 the percentage of commutes every day was just above 40%. The figure experienced a sharp decline through the period to a level of 20% by 2019.

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, in 2013 the ratio of regular telecommuting was approximately 8%. The figure witnessed rapid growth during the given years to the highest point with 24% in 2019. By taking a closer look at the data, it can be seen that the situation was disparate significantly with some telecommuting. The first record in 2013 was at the level of 40%. From

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on, it rose slightly to 45% in 2016 and stayed stable.

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