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Dear teacher I hope

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letter

will find

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you

will

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I am writing

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letter for the purpose of getting

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more information to request about

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, it is really interesting for me to know about that

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,the most important

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that I would like to ask is that

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Secondly

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other information

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necessary for me is that I hope that you will forgive me for taking up your valuable time so if you contact me on my mobile phone number which is 33333332222

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I believe that you would

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into consideration and accept my request as it is highly necessary for me I look forward to receiving a prompt

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yours sincerely Sarvarbek

uluga2002Sat Feb 15 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Improve the logical flow by clearly stating your purpose in the introduction.

task achievement

Ensure complete sentences and clarity of thought throughout the letter.

positive

Your greeting and closing are appropriate for a formal letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

116 words

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you want to learn a language .There is a teacher near to where you live Write a letter to the teacher in the letter

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do, they could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

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Many countries want to host international sports event, while other countries think that hosting sports events has some problems that benefits. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today, some young people say that their mobile phones are the most important thing they own. Do you think that the popularity of mobile phones is a good or bad thing?