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The bar chart shows education levels in the world in three years, 1980, the current year and 2060. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The presented bar chart compares the amount of
people
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 by
education
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level
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on
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 the world in five various categories including: No
education
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, Primary only, Lower secondary, Finished secondary and Post-secondary
education
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 during a specific period of time
1980
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between 1980
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 and the current year with the predication of 2060. The vertical axis measured
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number
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the number
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 of
people
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 in billions,
whereas
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 the horizontal showed the changes over time.
Overall
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, all
education
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levels
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 had a significant increase during the given years.
In addition
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, the
number
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 of
people
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 had a dramatic growth,
while
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 it continues until 2060 at only post-secondary
education
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level
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.
According to
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 the data, in 1980 all
education
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levels
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 started with the
level
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 between just more than 2
billion
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 and 4
billion
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. The post-secondary
education
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 had the highest
number
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 of
people
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 4
billion
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, followed by finished secondary with almost equal quantity.
However
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, those with no
education
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 had the lowest
number
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 of
people
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 with just above 2
billion
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. By taking a closer look at the given diagram, it can be seen that the figure has experienced a dramatic climb in the current year. It witnesses a rapid jump to the highest points in each
level
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. The
number
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 of
people
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 in all
levels
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 of
education
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 is between just more than 2
billion
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 and 6
billion
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. The post-secondary
education
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 has the highest
number
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 of
people
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 6
billion
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, followed by finished secondary at 5
billion
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.
In contrast
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, the situation will be disparate significantly in 2060. The
number
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 of
people
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 in all
levels
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 of
education
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 will be between under 2
billion
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 and 7
billion
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, education, level, number, levels, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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