The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the millions of visitors between 2010 and 2017 in Caribbean islands.
Overall
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, the scale has increased each year.
That is
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to say, in 2010 there were only one
million
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tourists but after 7 years it
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increased
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and reached a total of 3,5
million
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.
Firstly
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, count of individuals who stayed on cruise ships in 2010 was less than 0,5
million
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,
as well as
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in 2012. But in 2011 and in 2014 there were 500 thousand people. After 2013, the number of people began to rise
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and to be precise, in 2014, it grew by as much as five hundred thousand, reaching one
million
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. The following year, it increased by only 250,000 society . In 2016 there were 1,5
million
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humans,
while
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in the next year were 2,000,000.
On the other hand
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, the number of visitors who stayed on the island in 2010 and 2011 was more than on cruise ships it was 750,000. In 2012 the amount was 1,750,000. The next 3 years had the same number of humans, to be exact it was 1,5
million
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people. In 2016 it was 1,250,000,
while
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the following period increased only by 250,000.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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