The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates how many billion minutes were spent on three types of telephone calls by users in the UK from 1995 to 2002.
Overall
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, local calls were the most popular over the
years
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.
However
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, there was a rising trend in mobile
phone
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calls and national and international
phone
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calls
while
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local calls increased in the first four
years
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and
then
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decreased for the next four
years
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. In 1995, the local
phone
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calls reached over 70
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the national and international calls were only below 40. Meanwhile, the usage of mobile calls was the least popular with only around 5. The number of local fixed lines was still rising from 1996 to 1998 until it culminated in 1999 with 90
then
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, its popularity started to go down until it closed at above 70 in 2002.
In contrast
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, the popularity of national and international calls and mobile phones constantly escalated over the
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with national and international calls being more popular than mobile
phone
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calls. The figure for national and international calls slowly rose until it reached 60 in 2002.
Whereas
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, the number of mobile calls increased significantly, doubled its number in 2000 from 22 to below 40 and
finally
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reached 45.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, phone with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number of minutes
  • telephone calls
  • categories
  • local – fixed line
  • national and international – fixed line
  • mobiles
  • general trend
  • yearly totals
  • significant changes
  • milestones
  • data
  • rise significantly
  • decline
  • steady increase
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • exponential growth
  • over the period
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