The pie chart shows the percentage of women in poverty and the bar chart shows poverty rates by sex and age. They are from the United States in 2008.

The pie chart shows the percentage of women in poverty and the bar chart shows poverty rates by sex and age. They are from the United States in 2008.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart shows the percentage of women in poverty and the bar chart shows poverty rates by sex and age. They are from the United States in 2008.
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The pie chart illustrates women’s
poverty
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rates in the US based on marital status and the bar graph shows the comparison of
poverty
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between men and women of different ages in percentage.
According to
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both graphs,
it is clear that
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females
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mainly lead the
rate
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of
poverty
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. Another fact is that single
females
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with no children have the highest percentage of
poverty
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among other groups. The group of married
females
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with and without children have the two lowest percentages with 12% and 8%, respectively.
In contrast
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, the
rate
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of single
females
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without kids to be supported is doubled, compared to single
females
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with kids. The comparison of
poverty
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between males and
females
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in the US started at around 21%. Interestingly, when the number continuously decreases with males at the age of 18-24, it peaks for
females
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reaching 22%. The
rate
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then
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shows a downward trend for both genders, reaching the lowest number in the age group of 45-55 with 7% and 9%. The
rate
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of men and women
then
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finished off at the age of 75 and older with a large gap between genders by almost 10%.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words poverty, females, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic
  • financial hardship
  • proportion
  • poverty line
  • socio-economic factors
  • employment opportunities
  • wage disparities
  • age groups
  • intersect
  • social policies
  • targeted interventions
  • disproportionately affected
  • comparative analysis
  • statistical representation
  • data visualization
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