The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
number
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of people who travelled to Caribbean islands in eight years between 2010 to 2017. In general, the total of people is other transport. Looking in more detail, we can see that in the first three years, the
number
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of tourists increased dramatically to 15
million
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.
Then
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after that, an increase to less than 3
million
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people.
Then
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climb in a big change until 3.5
million
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in 20017.
Furthermore
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, the
number
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of visitors who stayed on ships grew in up first two years,
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went down in 2012 after that increased to 2
million
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in 2017.
However
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, the
number
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of tourists who visited the island first grew to under 1
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in 2010,
then
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started increasing to 1.5;
after
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this
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year, we can observe that unchanging,
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started to decline to less than 1.5
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in 2016. One notable point is that the total
number
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of visitors who travelled to the island of the Caribbean was bigger than the others.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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