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The chart below shows information about changes in average house price in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house price in 1989.

The presented graph compares the differences in average prices of five various cities including: New York, Madrid, Tokyo, Frankfurt and London during a specific period of time (1989-1990-1996-2002). The vertical axis measured percentage change,
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 the horizontal axis showed the cities over time.
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, the period from 1996 to 2002 had the most significant increase,
while
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 the period between 1990-1995 experienced a rapid decline in house prices.
According to
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 the given diagram, it can be observed that the average house price in New York was at the level of -5%. The figure witnessed a sharp growth to a level of +5% during 1996-2002.
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, London has risen from -7% to approximately 11%.
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, the situation was dramatically disparate with Frankfurt. By taking a closer look at the data, it can be seen that sine 1990 to 1995 the average was a small fraction almost 3%. From
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 on, the figure had dropped to 1%.

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