You want to learn a language.There is a teacher near to where you live. Write a letter to the teacher. In the letter. •say how you came yo know about him/her •explain why you want to learn •ask what help they can offer

Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to you so as to join in your

Turkish

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language

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lessons and I need to learn

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language

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within 3 months. In the first place, I have to mention that I am Omadi who is your neighbor where you live near my apartment. These days, I am looking for a

Turkish

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language

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course, eventually, one of my friends informed me about your course which has the necessary amenities and methods to learn

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language

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. If I speak clearly, why I want to learn

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language

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, as we purchased some tickets for a plane with my family members for travelling.

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, I have to learn

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quickly to talk with the public,

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, I will explore their historical destinations and buildings. If you have a chance, I will request deeply from you to teach me the

Turkish

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language

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individually. I have spare time at the weekends from 7:00 am to 5:00 pm. Hoping that you will receive my request and help me to learn

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language

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as fast as possible. I will wait for your reply at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Omadi Yuldashev

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Oct 15, 2024

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task achievement

Clarify how you came to know about the teacher's course for better task completion.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure paragraphs are distinct for each point to enhance logical structure and single idea per paragraph.

coherence and cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriate and courteous.

task achievement

The tone is suitable and polite for a letter to a teacher.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

191 words

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