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The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.

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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of
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car sharing
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usage
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 across the world in five distinct
continents
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, in the years 2008 and 2016. Unite measured in percentage.
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, it is clear from the graph that, North
America
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 and
Europe
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 had the highest ratio of
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car sharing
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,
while
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 South
America
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, Australia and Asia represented the lowest percentages over the given period.
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, all
continents
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 witnessed an upward trend, with the exception of
Europe
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 which saw a downward trend. In 2008
Europe
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car
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 sharing
usage
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 was under 60% representing a higher figure than North
America
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 which accounted to be at 30%. The remaining
continents
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 displayed a minimal proportion with approximately less than five percent and Asia represented the highest value among them.
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 in 2016, in North
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America
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America,
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 the ratio of
usage
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 of sharing
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car
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 was above
Europe
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 roughly at 60% and more than 30%, respectively.
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, the rest of the
continents
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 experienced a modest rise in 2016 than they were
in
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 2005, but none of them exceeded 10% of
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car sharing
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, usage, continents, america, europe with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "represented" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Distribution
  • Global car sharing schemes
  • Changes over time
  • Geographical regions
  • Percentage share
  • Popularity and availability
  • Trends and policy impacts
  • Emerging markets
  • Diversification
  • Even distribution
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