The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.

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The table chart illustrates the population of individuals from Britain,

Germany

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, Italy, Poland and Spain

country

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residing in each other's nations in 2011.

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Germany

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was the most popular among

people

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for living,

whereas

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people

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were least attracted towards Polish

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. Italian

people

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mostly liked to live in

Germany

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and were around 556.000 Italians.

Germany

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was the

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which attracted the highest number of

people

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which was 1.198.000 in 2011. British had a 1.037.000 total population out of which 550.000 were Polish, 297.000 German, 119.000 Italian and 71.000 were Spanish

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people

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, Italy, Polish and Spanish countries were less popular among individuals to live. Around 6.000

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live in Poland which was the least as compared to other countries.

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, In Polish, there were only 170 Spanish residents and that was very low.

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, Italian

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were attracted more to live in

another

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other countries

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country

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and there were almost 863.670 inhabitants

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were living in other countries.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words germany, country, people with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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158 words

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The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.

Are you for or against international trade?

Some feel that individuals today spend too much time following political news while others feel politics deserves greater attention. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your own answers.

In the future, fewer people will start bands or produce music because they will worry about their music being downloaded from the internet for free. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?