The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.
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using cars together in five regions between 2008 and 2016.
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, the percentage of people sharing four-wheeled vehicles in daily activities showed an increase, except in Europe continent, where fell significantly. In 2008, Europe had the biggest ratio and ranked first in using private transportation together at approximately 60%. Followed by North America which had half value from the first position.
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, the three continents had below 10% with respectively orders from Asia, Australia and South America as the smallest number of citizen participants.
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, in 2016 there were contrasting changes in utilising shared systems. The number of people in Europe suddenly decreased to around 30%, yet it almost reduced half of their consumers and dropped to second place. Meanwhile, North America switched to be the number one and jumped to slightly above 50%. Afterwards, other territories had slight growth but remained in the same position in orders and not over by 10%.

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  • Distribution
  • Global car sharing schemes
  • Changes over time
  • Geographical regions
  • Percentage share
  • Popularity and availability
  • Trends and policy impacts
  • Emerging markets
  • Diversification
  • Even distribution
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