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The graph below shows the quantities of good transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

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The presented line chart provides the numbers of wares that were transported by four various ways including: roads, water, rail and pipeline in the UK in a specific period of time (1974-2002). The vertical axis measured the amounts in
million
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tonnes
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,
whereas
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 the horizontal axis showed the changes over time.
Overall
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, the four different modes of transportation were relatively variable. The road had the highest quantities of goods transported,
while
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 the pipeline had the lowest over the given years.
However
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, the road had the most significant increase,
while
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 the rail remained stable.
According to
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 the given diagram, it can be observed that in 1974 the water started with almost 39
million
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tonnes
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. From
then
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 on, it experienced a rise to a level of 58
million
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 and stayed for years
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 dropped to 55
million
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tonnes
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 in 1998 and continued climbing to approximately 62
million
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tonnes
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 in 2002.
In contrast
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, the situation was dramatically disparate with rail. The first record was in 1974 with a level of 40
million
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tonnes
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. The figure witnessed a slight fluctuation and reached a dip in 1994 with a level of 29
million
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tonnes
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.
Then
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 returned to the first point in 2002.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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