The diagram below shows how a biofule called ethanol is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The diagram shows the process of production of biofuel. It is evident,

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the graph that it is a long-lasting process, which starts with harvesting plants

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and ends with getting ethanol, which is as effective as other fuels. First of all, energy is being collected from flora resources ,owing to their sunlight and carbon dioxide

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, all collected plants are going through pre-processing, and cellulose is being produced. Afterwards, all of the cellulose is turned into sugars, through significant chemical processes, and those

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are multiplied , to get a huge amount of energy. Sugars, as the main source of energy, are being included in microbes,

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the possibility of increasing the number of hydrocarbons, and it is the final line of manufacturing. Ethanol

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, can be used as a fuel for cars, jets, and lorries. In summary, transport, which uses ethanol, spreads out the carbon dioxide in the atmosphere, and in order, trees collect the gases, and the recycling process starts again, and continues unstoppably .

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