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Band 5.5

You are planning to organise your high school class reunion. For that, write a letter to your friend to invite him/her to the reunion. You should include the following in your letter: • when and where the party is • give some details about what is going to happen at the party • tell him/her what you have been doing recently

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Dear sandy, I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
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 letter to invite you to
high
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the high
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 school reunion which I
planned
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am planning
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 next month. I have been planning a reunion party
of
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for
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 our 2018 batch for
few
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a few
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 weeks. I would really appreciate your presence and insights on
this
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 event. I am planning to hold the part on 23rd May, Sunday since most of our matchmates can attend conveniently.
Moreover
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, Tower Hall is booked because it offers convenient transportation and
clean
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a clean
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 environment for special occasions. I planned music
concert
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concerts
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 and fun games where our classmates
mingle
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mingled
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 with each other and recollect all those beautiful memories of our school days.
Additionally
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, I arranged
wide
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a wide
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 variety of cuisines for dinner. I have been
practicing
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practising
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 a solo dance as a surprise event. I would appreciate
if
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it if
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 you do a mimicry. I have arranged everything for
this
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 event and paid
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in advances
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advances
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advance
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 for the hall and food. I am expecting your response
on
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to
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 any suggestions Warm regards, Santhoshkumar

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task achievement
Consider adding a brief introduction or background about why the reunion is significant, as it will enhance the completeness of the response.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure to use appropriate transitions between ideas to improve the flow of the letter.
coherence and cohesion
Double-check for any typographical errors (e.g., 'part' should be 'party'). This will help polish your writing further.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is warm and inviting, which is appropriate for a reunion invitation.
task achievement
You included specific details about the event, such as the date and location, which provide clarity to the reader.
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