You live with a roommate at university but you have trouble studying because of a problem related to your roommate. Write a letter to an administrator at your university and include: • Who you are • The problem • What you suggest they do

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to express my concern regarding my roommate, who has been quite troublesome for me. I am a second-year student of Master’s in Engineering at your University, living in room number 34 on

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floor, in

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area provided by your side to the University students. Moving towards

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issue that I am encountering

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my roommate,

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the loud music played by her is not tolerable to me as it affects my productivity during studies by causing distraction. Not only,

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is loud, but

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the things are always scattered here and there by her in

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the room

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, which is again not acceptable at all. To add to it, her phone calls always disturb me during

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of my studies. I can say she is

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polarized

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to me. I would request you to take some immediate action in

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case, either transfer her to another room or offer me a separate residing area. I can even give her a chance if you could talk with her about

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matter and that works. Please take some action at your earliest convenience before the situation gets worse. Yours faithfully, Gagandeep

GaganMon Feb 17 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Consider organizing your letter into clear paragraphs that separate the introduction, description of the problem, and suggestion for improvement. Each paragraph should have a clear focus.

task achievement

Try to vary your vocabulary and sentence structures to enhance your writing. This will help to make your message clearer and more engaging.

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You clearly identified the problem and your request for action. This demonstrates a good understanding of the task requirements.

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Your tone is polite and respectful, which is appropriate for a letter to an administrator.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

196 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

accommodation
residential advisor
disruptive
concentration
mediation
compliance
amicable
tenable
rectify
study habits
commons area
quiet hours
academic achievement
cohabitation
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