Some educators believe that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an ongoing interest in teenagers learning

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. Many teachers argue that all pupils should be trained on how to use musical

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. I completely agree with

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notion to a great extent, and I will delineate my reasons in

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essay, supported with relevant examples.

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, the reason why I believe children should be taught how to play musical

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is because it influences their focus and concentration.

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, to ensure accuracy in the notes, rhythms and patterns, a child requires his utmost concentration to play guitar, piano etc.

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improves the way he concentrates, not just in

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in

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work.

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, research was carried out in a

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in my local community in Nigeria. The academic performances of all the students from grade one to grade nine were assessed. The result showed that the pupils who learnt and played musicals performed better in class from lower grades than the ones who did not play.

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clearly proves that playing the

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is of benefit to children.

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, another reason why I agree that students should be trained on how to play the

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equipment is because it fosters their social and emotional development.

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means that playing piano etc.improves how they express their emotions, which leads to their emotional intelligence over time.

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, attending a group class, band practice or playing in

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, would help them build their

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, social and collaboration skills.

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, a fourteen-year-old Joe,

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grew up in

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seclusion from the outside world. His parents consulted a psychologist, who advised him to join a

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club in

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. Joe learnt

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and started to play

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. He told his heartbreaking story to the world, one that he neither told his parents nor the specialist.

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, within a year of joining the club, he had made lots of friends

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and felt better than earlier years of his life.

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indeed demonstrates the need to teach youngsters how to play musicals. In conclusion, with the rise in academic

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of our students and an increase in the rate of independence within the younger generation, I support that musical

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should be incorporated into their schools’ extracurricular activities for everyone because

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will positively influence their concentration in

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as well as

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facilitate their social and emotional growth.